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Too short, weak punchline

It's just not finished... Yes yes, minimalism, whatever. "Minimalism" only works when either what is presented (or not presented) is of such great significance that nothing else is needed to make the piece great.

Though the "treeclock beats puppies" idea could potentially be funny, coming out and stating it at the end is really overdone. I was waiting for some kind of hilarious punchline which never came.

AlbinoClock responds:

It's quite finished, it's exactly as I intended it to be. As to having a punchline, it's not funny. It's sad. It's about a puppy being beaten to death with a baseball bat.

What's funny about that, you sick fuck>

Funny

Good humor, silly, stupid.

Definately get an extra point for the slowed down Dusty Dunes track from Earthbound

JacobMichaelCampbell responds:

Thanks for watching/reviewing! I haven't gotten flamed on here for a while now! I'm glad the scores show it too (kinda)

Excellent

There really isn't much to say. You know it's good, I know it's good. We all know it's good.

Absolutely beautiful lip synching, by the way.

Quirky, funny

Good, random humor. Started out kinda slow, but it got better. Random violence = great.

Work on your sound

It's not that I find clock voices annoying; I just can't understand what is being said.

Also, your audio is clipping horribly; you should definately look into fixing it.

Try again.

Bad = Good

This is one of the few cases in which something which is so horribly bad and underplanned ends up being pretty damn funny.

Thanks for the laugh.

Bob-The-Cheese responds:

I'll take that as a compliment... i think...

Cheers

Not Bad

Quick, fun, simple. Good for a laugh

biblo responds:

Exactly what was intended. Fantastic!

Great work

Excellent use of hand-drawn artwork. It really felt like you had drawn on paper, cut out the figures, and were moving them around.

If you ever do another, I would recommend not motion tweening for big movements like walking, rather fade in/out still images for that dramatic look.

I also half-expected Trogdor to pop out halfway through. >_<

Try Again

You should spend a lot more time on your next one.

Is it finished?

Ok, so I got to the samurai potato part, and then..... just a white screen.

Is this even finished?

If not, why are you submitting unfinished work?

kyochi-ichi responds:

ummm....... Kyochi-ichi here. the white part is a part of the movie..... that was samurai_potato's part. but he did not finish. Please read the disciption.

Maxaroni5's Reponse:
NO IT IS NOT FINISHED!!!! DID YOU EVEN READ THE DESCRIPTION??? WE SUBMITTED IT BECAUSE WE THOUGHT WE WERE GOOD AT ANIMATING OKAY?????

Samurai_potato's response:
Sorry about my part........ if you read the description it explains that we were all pressed for time because we were only using one computer and we had a demo version of flash 8

hey i am on the intarnets

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